All Comments on 'The Line of Succession Vol. 02 - The Divorce'

Great read looking forward to more.

Way to go Bear!!! Fun read! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Love it Bear! Really enjoyed this read. Looking forward to more soon. Thank-you!

Absolutely loving it. Who thought you had this in you?

Looking forward to the next chapter

5/5

Great job with the imaginative sci-fi backstory. The court scene, and the bottle of piss, were hilarious. Really looking forward to the next episode.

Just keep waiting for more!!!

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Enjoying this story soooo much!

Great story. Looking forward to the next chapter. 5stars

I agree - great story and looking forward to the next chapter!

Awesome story looking forward to the next chapter keep up the good work.

I enjoy space opera sci-fi. The addition of humor just polishes the whole thing. I hope you add many more episodes. Thank you for a fun read. Mever

Really nice presentation of a genre you said was new to you. The quick presentation of a historical timeline was helpful and not overdone. I’m really looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for your outstanding work in developing the concepts and presenting them in an interesting and enjoyable manner 5*****.

Good story! I'm a little disappointed that it hasn't continued from here.

Enjoying the continuation of the story. Thanks

Pretty good story.. so far.. But it's been near half a year now. No new chapters; your Not gonna leave us all " hanging" I hope. Would love to see this one wrapped up . So would all yóur other fans who've taken the time to read it.. Plus your other stories as well.., Yeah ; I Know life messes with yeah.. the Real one ;not this., But some old cusses like me, can't get around like we use to.. so .. we read... Everything... At least if it's interesting;like your stories... Anyway; like everybody else.... Waiting to see if you'll ever finish what you started.. oh and thanks for what you've already wrote.. at least from this old man.. 👍😉😁👌

Ouch, reading this chapter caused my smiling face to grin so much it is now sore. But… it is a good hurt! 5*s.

This has to be the dumbest court room scene in the history of court room scenes...