All Comments on 'The Liquids Rule Ch. 04'

More and plz make it longer

David ceased the opportunity I think should be seized the..

You're right. It is seized. I can't believe I missed that. Hope you enjoyed it just the same.

Your best! Loved it! Keep writing.

I enjoyed your writing. Well done :)

can't wait for the next chapter.Good job!...btw was anxiously waiting for chapter 4 but it does not appear in the non consent section???

To be very honest, despite the young woman being violated, this story excited me very much. Mainly the idea of a woman (you) writing it and being turned on by such a scenario. I want to read more of your fantasy, Dionysian Daughter, and I want to read other fantasies that you have. Please.