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To say that was a little odd would be an understatement.

The problem isn't the story. It's the TELLING of the story. Soooo many mistakes they detracted from the plot.

not sure how u got this from friends but ok. was too political for me

The Beetles had hair down to their waste before they were interned.

What absolutely mindless drivel

A full page of cringe.

Delete away!

Bunch of editing errors and too over the top for me. 3*

You know there's not much chance when the first word has two spelling mistakes! Presumably you mean FOREWORD.

Meh, needs much ending, and why did you repeat the beginning at the end? Also, what's the song?

Badly needed a couple of extra reads to catch typos, misspellings, missing words, etc.

Just when you think you couldn't possibly read another flat-out moronic tale, this pops up.

I got to the 14 inch cock and gave up.

The only reason this is worth 2 stars is the joke at the end.

Total crap!

Need to get an editor very badly on this one. Concept is good but quotation marks all over and not very clear.

Sophomoric and juvenile at best. Couldn't wait to score it with one star.

YIKES!! Michelle? Who was pitching and who was catching on that one?

Pretty sure the wet diapered diatribe at the beginning was the best part.

When you hit 100 stories (and lord knows we hope you dont) I'll bet you wont get beyond a story thats actually more worthwhile than rectal sores. And if in fact you write 2...TWO...stories that dont make a port-a-potty on a late July 95% & humid day smell better by compare, as you have done with all your stories, I will find a cuck one and give it 5 stars without pointing out the truth about cucks and their conservative repression.

Deal? 2 of them.

Well at least we know why your editor wants to be anonymous. It was actually kinda funny 3*

I gave up when the lists never ended, I think writer put it in wrong category think it should have been celeb. Shame on site not rejecting it for such an simple error, star ratings can't rate it below 0 so not point putting one on it

At the beginning of the story the author stated "I wrote this story for fun". I would think that the story was going to be over the top in its telling. Many other authors have done the same; an for some reason reader take it as a serious story...... I liked it even with a few issues.

You should be happy it wasn't another DAM interracial or Cuckold story!!!

Had she had more faith in her husband, she would have known that he was always truthful and kept accurate books!

Only the joke was good. It was hilarious!

Ok the joke at the end got it 5 stars for sure!

Please do keep writing and I will keep reading.