All Comments on 'The Locked Door Pt. 01'

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Anonymousabout 4 years ago

Brilliant!

Wow, this is such a hot story. Really well written and leaving me desperate for more. Hope we don’t have to wait too long for the next chapter!

decimus about 4 years ago

Hot, Hot, Hot...

Loved this, more please....

maddict about 4 years ago

How come.

She was shaken like jelly, Girl jam don't shake like that.

skier1 about 4 years ago

Great Story

Great story, and excellent writing, I look forward to the next chapters!

Submisky35 about 4 years ago

LIKED IT

Nicely written story. Had to keep reading to see where it was going, and wasn't disappointed. Good descriptions of the place and the actions. Looking forward to Pt. 2.

GrrrreatImagination about 3 years ago

Brilliant, in every aspect.

Anonymousalmost 3 years ago

She must have her sister lick her pussy.

CEK127 over 1 year ago

Mmmhhmmm - yummy! I hope there's a part 2.

CEK127 over 1 year ago

Terrific. Well written I eagerly look forward to reading the additional chapters.

NEthingGoze over 1 year ago

good beginning, I enjoyed it

LunaDoggy 4 months ago

Absolutely superb! Thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

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