All Comments on 'The Locker Room'

The story was nice and sensual but the end was a bit, you know, too fluffy

started out a little rapey, but it made sense in the end. good short story.

Sensual, quick banter and with a HEA. Loved it.

Love the story -- the playing hard-to-get, the naked bodies, and the love that develops between them. Really love Mike's description -- hairy chest, big cock, and a real drive love Ella. The playfulness between them is great! Please write another chapter! Marriage and children for them!

I’ve read so many of your stories and you’re one of the few authors, I check for new stories. You should write novels someday

romantic and sexy! I love all your story and glad you come back. :-*

I truly enjoyed reading and gave it 5 stars, but it has nothing to do in the Nude day contest.

I didn't bother reading past that point; it feels like rape fantasy.

Aww man I was hoping you would add more but then I saw there was an ending!!i really love your stories! I am reading your lessons in love now! I am super surprised someone wouldn’t like this one! I didn’t think it seemed bad at all! He didn’t do anything to her.. but I know everyone feels differently.. but I love your stories and characters! If you ever want to add more to this you totally could!

Loved the story! So well written and I enjoyed the little playing hard to get in the beginning. I've felt that same hate-but-desire-him feeling towards someone else before so I could understand how conflicted Ella was about Mike. I'm glad she gave him a chance in the end.

TWO PEOPLE FIND LOVE IN A LOCKER ROOM. WHAT A WAY TO STEAM THINGS UP. I HAVE BEEN FOLLOWING ADA FOR A WHILE AND HAVE WATCHED HER DEVELOPE A STYLE OF HER OWN. HER STORY LINES ARE REALLY GOOD, SHE JUST NEEDS SOME MORE ENCOURAGEMENT FROM HER FANS TO MAKE HER STORIES LITTLE MORE COMPLEX AND IN-DEPTH. NICE GOODING ADA.

I love this story! Excellent writing and definitely hot!

Or is it this blazing hot story? Mmmm, yeah, it's the story.

A passionate, impulsive clash of committed opponents who discover they're on the same side after all.

A very good written enemies to lovers short story. I need to see more like this. Great job! I'm looking forward to reading more from you.

Very nice Ada, thanks and keep up the good work

They are fun

"I always like these short Ada stories

They are fun"

- Thanks, Lovecraft_Lore :-) They also keep me from going "crazy" after working with one of the longer stories for a couple of months :-) I'm so glad that they are appreciated :-)

I wish this story was one if your longer stories. While I enjoy the short stories, the long ones are just so much better!

"One wish!

I wish this story was one if your longer stories. While I enjoy the short stories, the long ones are just so much better!"

- Oh, wow! You read my mind, LOL. I'm currently rewriting this story and extending it 😄 So far, it won't become one of my longest, but I never know in advance. And yes, the longer stories are better but they take a really long time to develop - make me crazy after a while, LOL 🤪

Does this mean the longer version will be available soon? I know it will probably be for purchase and that is completely okay with me!

"One Wish Response

Does this mean the longer version will be available soon? I know it will probably be for purchase and that is completely okay with me!"

- Oh, wow 😄 Thanks for asking, Justareader33 ❤️ It's 80 per cent done, but I'm not completely happy with the first draft yet. Too much sex at the moment, LOL. But I guess I can get it published by early September 😄❤️ And you're right, it will only be for purchase since I have the old version here already.

BTW, I'm working on a Summer contest story that I will add here for free so I hope you'll give that one a read 😄

"One Wish Response

Does this mean the longer version will be available soon? I know it will probably be for purchase and that is completely okay with me!"

And your wish has been fulfilled!!! I've just published the new (and longer) version of this story, and I gave it the title "Against the Wall". I've always wanted to use that title, LOL. If you're interested, check my Bio page for more information, ❤️😄

Love everything about this!!! You're such a good writer!! Love your work!

Like it a 5 much! Sometimes like the little Scotty dog magnets there is a strong attraction but the little dogs are facing the wrong direction. - when they finally turn the magnets around lookout ......

THIS PATHETIC MONEYMAKING WRITER THRIVES ON EMBARRASSING WOMEN AND IN THIS STORY CONDONING SEXUAL HARASSMENT AND COERCION

To the Anonymous from 9 days ago… just wow, you need to grow up or get your head checked, not all your dogs are barking so to speak

He won big, she lost bigger