by Miltone
Anyone who thinks that a romance story can't have sex in it and still be a romance story has never read Miltone's stories. This chapter is proof that a story can have the love/erotic element in it and not only be a romance story, but be a better romance story for it. Every chapter in the David/Holly saga is a romance, and overall among the very best romance stories around. This tear-jerker of a story, written with such beauty by the author deserves more than the 5 stars it gets here. Outstanding in every respect.