by FeelingCreative534
"Oh fuck" is right! You could feel the danger that this kind of relationship presented when reading part 1, but after that incident in the automat you can feel it even more so. Now, with the possibility of having been discovered by whoever's in that that Model A and what the consequences might be, it's making my blood run cold. This is very well written and does an excellent job of showing the mood and feelings of that time period. Bravo!
Historical, hot sex, wonderful descriptions, hints of danger and forbidden intimacy. Just a stupendous story and I hope more chapters are in the works! Thank you!
Thank you all for your really nice comments! I love reading your feedback, it gives me the inspiration I need to keep going. In this chapter of Jason and Andrew's story, I wanted to convey just how different the two of them were to the world around them, both in their own ways...innocent, naive, and incredibly passionate. Yet the world around them was judgmental, temperamental, and fragile.
Great way you have depicted the intimacy and innocence of these two men along with their very different lives. I always react very strongly to discrimination of any kind, and in this situation, it is at least in two ways. Let's see how these two deal, not only with systemic challenges, but also with Andrew's marriage and family commitments. I can identify with how difficult this can be having been attracted to male to male relationships while having a wife and children who I truly loved.