by Trionyx
I typically don’t read First Time stories yet chose to read this one based on my enjoyment of your stories. Glad I did. We’ll done.
Great story! Always enjoy your fantasies and the way you tell them. Lots of possibility here if you decide to tell us more about this couple and maybe their friends. (Hint)
Cheers
SAGE
Loved the complete story. Well developed and exactly similar to so many initial experiences. Been on that exact trail. Well done. Thx
Wonderful, 10 stars! Please write a part 2. Maybe the rubber will break, and Nat will get a swelled belly, and 2 new names, Mrs. and mommy...
Trionyx, from a Lone Ranger fan for all my life, this was a fun and very sweet tale of young love. I liked how you were able to describe Natalie as part of the action, and how you used JR and the SUV to hide the references in plain sight from those who my not be well versed in the legend. However, I think you missed one big opportunity when Natalie took her ride on top. When she got to where she wanted to be, where was the “Hi-yo, Silver! Away!”? Hahaha! Just kidding! Best wishes in the contest!