All Comments on 'The Loners Ch. 15'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Keep going

That the three lovers continue to enjoy each other during a time of great stress is what love is all about

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
good work

Alan for Dracula

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
nice

By the way, there was nothing wrong with the strap on scene, in fact it kinda made sense the way things were/are going.

PLUS! Damn nice writing, please keep it up

Mr_CuddlesMr_Cuddlesover 12 years ago

Make Alan or Katie Dracula !!

Et2bruttusEt2bruttusover 12 years ago

Katie becoming Dracula would be more interesting to me personally. Rachel and Alan eventually raising Katie and Alan's child would be a cool twist too. Toward the end of the story of course.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
nice

Why not make Rachel Dracula?

NeptoonNeptoonover 12 years ago
NICE

good story so far and the strap-on scene was good too keep up the good writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
wtf?

So... if a girl admits she doesn't like it up the ass she can be telling the truth. But if a guy says he doesn't he MUST be lying? Where do you get this shit?

Alphawolf100Alphawolf100over 11 years ago
Wtf

What kind of bullshit is this he forced to take it in the ass.I like u stories but the pissed me the fuck off. Some BULLSHIT

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Easy everyone!!!!!!!!!!!

For those of you who are bent all out of shape by him letting her fuck his ass with the strap on... Have you considered the level of love and trust that showed to her????? How many of us say we would do anything for the one we love? I'm not into ass fucking as it is; but to prove my love I could maybe bend once. Don't really know and it's based on sanitation. I don't even get turned on thinking about fucking some hottie in the ass as I can't help but think about my cock spasmming and sucking in bacteria or small flacks of shit. I'm neither a fuckie or fucker of asses. But for the story it proved a point. IT'S JUST A STORY!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
dafuq

we might be in love with someone. limitless love. but at the end of the day we are individuals with a specific mindset and preferences about what we are comfortable with. and someone should not use that LOVE to manipulate us and make us do something we are not comfortable with............ i don't know why i am bothering with this shit

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
just think about these words

Dracula likes taking a strapon up the ass and eating his own cum. Would anyone ever fear him? Nope they would just say hes a fag. Strongest person on the entire planet and hes his girlfriends bitch. You said it was about love. He is travelling across the entire country with her knowing that his life is in danger. If he has to take it up the ass just so she know he loves her she need to fucking die. Total bitch.

FseriesFseries7 months ago

Total tank. -5 stars. Oh, and it’s collared shirt. Not collard. One is a shirt feature around the neckline, the other is a vegetable.

FseriesFseries7 months ago

And at this point, non of them are even capable of being Dracula at Halloween let alone the super predator.

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