All Comments on 'The Long Awaited Return'

by AsiSalem

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Dimmu_BorgirDimmu_Borgirabout 4 years ago

Mixing present tense with past tense. Ugh.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Terrible.

Please don't write any more, this is the pits.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Short and sweet

This was very good and I hope that you will write a longer story in the future.

DunkirkDunkirkabout 4 years ago

Why not come in her cunt and breed her

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