All Comments on 'The Long Journey Home'

by TheGreatBlueWolf

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What.

Bobjoe787Bobjoe787over 2 years ago

I like it, very creative

HolggHolggover 2 years ago

Love the story, especially the ending. Horror stories dose something whit the mind, in a good way

wjames11wjames11over 2 years ago

Erotic and well written, but I was confused by the ending

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What a erotic story.

It seems like he-the protagonist- become a breeder of tentacle monster in the end

please keep write other erotic stories like this, later

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wow. Beautiful~<3. There's aren't enough male incubators out there. Fantastic story, I can't wait to see more

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Absolutely delicious story~~~, you must write more. The description of the egg insertion was divine~. If I may suggest an idea for a new story; futanari aliens probing for suitable incubators? :3

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I loved when the babies backed up his cum and turned him into a self stuffing cum machine

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

wow incredible. please write more. would love to see how it spreads further

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