All Comments on 'The Long Ride Pt. 03'

im really loving how this story is coming together

I love this story I can relate a little bit.. I became a dad at 17.. 5 stars all day

Better with every chapter and as mentioned by another very relatable these days. I am looking forward to what comes next.

It's lovely Soul. Cal and Shari both deserve happiness. I still say he should have bought a Harley and not a crotch rocket. Lol

Excellent new chapter. Please keep it going.

You have me hooked on this and several other unfinished stories (such as Broken, Jail Bird, and Soul Food). I've read most of your stories; except for a couple long running series. I'll start on them soon. Though, I understand you delete anonymous comments, the fact is, I like staying anonymous. Can't wait for more. Thank you.

I continue to enjoy it!

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Another brilliant installment of this story. Can't wait for more. Can't get enough of your any of your stories but any of them that has a romance part even just as a side price is always great.

I love the story, but one thing confuses me:

the shadow of Golden Gate? In Los Angeles??

I’ll admit the motorcycle lifestyle is not my favorite but this story is amazing. Thank you for sharing it with us. I’ve greatly enjoyed the first three parts and I’m looking forward to more. I’m sure you have some plot devices that will tug at my heart but I’ve enjoyed the ride so far. I’ve even come up with my own fanfic of future possibilities.

Great story great pair great father love all the characters hopefully it’s smooth sailing for Callum and Itzel and Shari.

i'll be honest - three of the best word that followed this story were "To be continued" I was dreading the last page as I was afraid I'd see "The End" This rivals several professional romance novels I've read, & actually tops many more. You should see about getting it published when its done :)

Thank you for your efforts. Eagerly looking forward to more.

Looking forward to the rest of this amazing story. Well thought out and well developed characters.

Love this story, couldn't out it down. I feel like I am watching a movie and getting wrapped up in the life of a father and his faughter. I can't wait until the next part is published. Thank you

Only drawback

Prefer authors who post parts/chapters the following day (s)

Glad to see you going outbof your comfrt zones and trying new tales. Your editing is getting much better as well. Still a few mistakes here and there, but definitey going in the right direction. All te best and hope to read more from you soon

Great story. Waiting to see what happens next.

Really enjoy this story and looking forward to the next chapter.

I'm enjoying this story immensely. It would be nice if author and editor would learn the proper use of the words too and to. If in your mind you can substitute the word "also", you are generally using "too" correctly.

Great story, only marred by the repeated use of some incorrect adjectives. 5*s.

I thought they went to LA and although UK resident I'm sure the Golden Gate is in San Franciscoi

Really am enjoying the story. AAAAAA++++

There was a passage when Cal was being kissed that said "his yes fluttered", come on, men's eyes don't flutter! Anyway, good story. This 'interview' with the future in-laws is going way too smoothly.........

Interesting that they could see the Bay and Golden Gate from LA.

@dgfergie

You’re not kissing the right guys. Trust me, their eyes flutter ;)

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Having lived very near Bel Air, I have never heard of any place in the LA area even called Golden gate. You must be referring to the bridge over the strait where the Pacific Ocean & San Francisco Bay meet, and the famous bridge now stands.

I have to remind myself the MC's are in their mid twenties. Their Parents in their late forties early fifties.

Damn, Itzel must have worn a bathing suit that covered her Unicorn tattoo.