All Comments on 'The Loophole (Brooke Ch. 02)'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
More!

More of these two, please. great stuff

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Good premise

Too short.

There was plenty of opportunity for conversation about their first time with her boyfriend. And what each liked about it. And about what each had been thinking/fantasizing about while masturbating.

And there could have been conversation about how each was masturbating. Was that the most visually stimulating to the watcher or should the other do it differently. Faster? Slower? Try to make it last by edging for a while?

Four stars.

macrumpmacrumpalmost 2 years ago

Good friends who don’t mention the fact they were in a threesome? What did they talk about?

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