All Comments on 'The Lost Valkyrie Ch. 02'

Good but too short to really be a chapter, a little more info or world building would've helped to flush things out and get the reader more invested in the story so far.

I have a part of the story that would make a good, world-building prologue. I'll put that out. Chapters will get longer as the story goes on, too. Thanks for the suggestions :)

I'm hooked

I am also hooked :D Thank you :)