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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

More please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Would like you to please continue this

Looking forward to your next part and hopefully it will be longer.

Also you may note how they procure the female "slaves"

Are they spouses etc.

I think Jack should figure out how to get his EX wife back as his personal "slave"

R&D version to try all their new developments on her :)

Thank you for writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Ridiculous. Too quick. Too fantastic

ontsurtontsurtabout 4 years ago

I like it. It's far fetched sure but really what stories aren't. Writing is good. I like the concept of enforced helplessness. Hope there will be more stories in this world

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