All Comments on 'The Lounge'

Jim is a blind idiot, not anyway real a husband is not going to let that shit pass. Jim's wife is dumb for not saying anything and giving in to the forced sex.

story gets a 1 for being really stupid.

No reality as written. The husband would know and the wife would not care about ruining the husbands fun evening. At least when alone in the booth slap the guy and draw attention. Better yet dont sit next to the guy! Then at the end after being raped she wants the guy again?

1* I hope you're proud, you've made stupid look good.

I love the genuine sexuality of you writing! I got your messages through Lit and responded through Lit and to the email address you gave lit, but never heard back. Check your email address or junk filter and PM me again.

MP

Never mind the adverse comments; it's a very sexy story of one woman's fantasy. Loved it.

Love that you're writing again.

stupid 1*

Wake up. I been done umpteen times by someone else. If I could I would delete it CRAP.

And who is Dave??

Too many stories that women are raped, and in the middle they start enjoying. Not a positive message to these rspists

OMG that was seriously stupid.

I knew that "dumb" is major character flaw you as a writer suffer with when you this jewel of idiocy hit the screen "Since I was between the man and my husband, the guy moved closer to me as he spoke to us"

Yeah dumber than shit, and got worse from there.

Back to jacking off to Playgirl online for you Nancy.

The writer is a cuckold and writes about it. Public confession is good for the soul, sometimes. But in this case it just makes the writer look like a weak pathetic non human.

had the potential of SO much more if you hadn't gone PG-13 at the end!!

Who is Dave? This "story" is out of control, dribbling on and on without any real guidance. Next time, Plan, Write, Edit.

I found this to be a good read, the pace was good, not rushed or too slow.

Sorry but this really sucked and not in a sexual way. WHO IS DAVE?? Rather contrived and not very realistic. You’re in a booth, right? Why did all 3 of you sit on the same side? Nothing made logical sense. Sorry. Try again..

All she had to do was spill a drink on lover boy and then ask husband to take her home immediately. Story as written is a tad unrealistic.

Subject matter didn't bother me as it often does readers. This is just really poorly written. I kept going just because I was amazed at how bad it was and hoped for some sort of redemption at the end. Nope...

if your gonna wrote a cuck story

USE the cuck tag

*1 Star

Stealth Cuck Crap

26thNCuck Disapproved.

Unbelievable that Jim could be so naive/stupid but what the fuck it was wickedly erotic.

Rereading this wonderfully erotic story. Who hasn’t dreamed of seducing his friend’s wife and fondling her in his presence. Sorry not in touch anymore. But Happily I can still read your lovely stories. B0bbyshaft0@outlook.com

Loved the 'twinge between my legs' to close off the story

A little hard to believe the husband didn’t notice or maybe care, his wife as being groped, and she did nothing.

Thanks for sharing your work!

This stuff happens in a number of bars. Just watch if you want