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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Boring

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 1 year ago
Perfect timing

Josie is master manipulator

TatankaBillTatankaBillover 1 year ago

This is easy to score- you get five stars by my account. I love your descriptions of the two women. Nicely done Punkie!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Part 2 please. The tension was built up quite well.

BellaBronteBellaBronteover 1 year ago

Good story but it ended before the payoff promised in the summary!

nylonpunkienylonpunkieabout 1 year agoAuthor

Bella Bronte was quite right, the next parts should’ve been published along with this first chapter.

If you felt this one was dull then the second part is dirtier and the third is downright filth 🙂

I try to conjure believable people in outlandish situations and I hope their dialogue is suitably surprised and relatable.

I hope you find the complete The Love Bite amusing or arousing.

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Gothic middle-aged mum with a few kinks (pantyhose and nylons, dirty aromas and mean ol' grandpas). I like reading the filthy stories here and I'm trying to get better at telling my tales, I have published a few here if you fancy a read.

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