All Comments on 'The Love Box Ch. 03'

Well, you've let the inner Miri out of her box and it looks like she is going to run and run. How many more girls is she going to get involved with before she's exhausted? Looks like she's got an interesting life waiting round the corner for her.

I don't usually laugh at my own jokes, but I giggled like crazy when I wrote down "Miri, the Awakened Lesbian"

Chapter Four will feature... Something special. So, look forward to that.

I very much like your story. Excellent premise, interesting characters, and a fascinating story line. If I have 1 piece of constructive criticism it is that the sex scenes are both too infrequent and seem rushed. Now perhaps this is deliberate as to relate the inexperience of the main character, but it makes for somewhat lack luster reading.

What a great story so far !! You have a great imagination and I can’t wait for the next chapter .. oh and hurry up I’m not very patient .. lol ...

Really enjoying. Looking forward to chapter 04.

SB

The sexting sequence is one of the sexiest passages I've ever read... the anticipation, hesitation and resolution are exquisitely paced. Brilliant writing!

Great writing, ratcheting up the tension!