All Comments on 'The Lovely Daughters Ch. 05'

This series has had sort of a topsy-turvy flow to it yet it has intrigued me nonetheless. Though I am not crazy about the ending, I was kind of curious about the father’s unabashed and perverse attraction to his daughters and wondered how the story was going to end.

btw I would suggest a proof reader and maybe even an editor next time around.

Great job with this i cant wait to read what happens next.

Not interesting, too short, inappropriate spelling (vile instead of vial), a genuine mess.I'm normally not this uncomplimentary, but this is poor.