by deadeye_76
I feel the series is sliding more and more into cuckolding then cuckqueaning.
It would have been a LOT hotter for him to fuck a bridesmaid on his own wedding in the wardrobe or something as everyone waited for him to come to the altar and wed his wife.
I liked the earlier stories much better when the husband showed more initiative and not just got led around by his wife and other girls
Must be challenging, dreaming up new ways and reasons for these people to fuck like animals at every opportunity. Kind of monotonous.
the cuck dictates action like the wife did here... so yeah I agree not the best
How about getting Ann to take a cock even if has to be the only way to get a film made
Too far out for me. Unrealistic -- ALL this series is, but even if groom wants it this way, I didn't /don't. Kinda like I'm there feeling uneasy.
Paul in Oklahoma
... while admitting to myself that while the whole story is already -- I guess you call it -- an out-there kinky fetish (which I have so far enjoyed), I nevertheless thought it too extreme for a husband to not be the first to have sex after saying "I do." I could not help feeling bad for Mark (even if he didn't feel bad for himself).
Then got to my comment, and realized I felt about the same two years ago.
Did not evoke the sense of satisfied wonder as previous chapters.
Paul in Oklahoma
Okay, more of the same, Ann controlling everyone and all the action, and everyone just goes along with her. Is there something about this crazy bitch that I am missing that makes all these people do what she wants? I don't see it. I wanna see somebody tell her "Fuck you! I'll do what I want!".