by Todd172
Thought provoking indeed, that a life of mediocrity can be turned into a shining beacon of love. Damn fine story the both of you.
I really need to stop reading your stories late at night then realising it's one in the morning.
Your stories are amazing.
My second read-through of this story (binging this author) and it's just as powerful and amazing as the first. Flawless. Thank you very much for offering your work to make people's day better.
-I spent over 24 years active duty in the Army with in between times in the reserves and National Guard for a total of over 30 years carrying an ID card. I've met and served with folks like Schnell. Worse, I've met and had to deal with folks like his "wife" and "mother" as well.
-One would think that any of the services would try to weed out the Schnells, particularly since "up or out" has become policy, but there is a surprisingly human side to the Green Machine.
-Too bad all Sgt Majors aren't like this one, but there are enough. Good story, too real, good ending.
A Masterpiece, Todd and the Missis. A true Masterpiece. Worth every one of the Five Stars.
JPB
Found this gem. I had read it before and loved it. Can't beat a story where a person isent perfect but finds a way to make himself and others happy.
Wow. Need more like that - outside the box, but very real and believable. And without a lot of extra words and fluff. Well done, and thank you.
Read this now 3 times over the past, hmmm, couple of years maybe, and it always brings a tear to my eyes. Great ending twist, love your imagination and writing style here, keep it up!
Bob 3/22/24
I missed this when it came out but found it while going to reread one of your other stories. I feel like Jim Gaffigan talking about the bonus fry. "How did I miss you!?!" 5 stars