All Comments on 'The Loyalty Gene - Prequel'

Hello again, I think this is a helpful prologue. Looking forward to reading the rest when it's posted. Might want to resubmit to clean up the formatting errors.

I've test read a bit for this author, and what he has in store for the rest of the story is great, very original. Stay tuned!

Good Russian tale. But couldn't the old scientist make another woman?

Hi, lichtyd here. I'm thrilled so many people have enjoyed my prequel. Comments and questions are very useful as they often show me things I've missed.

Crusader235, while genetics are very advanced, there is not a method to rapidly grow genies. If Yevgeny were to commission a Natali type genie, it would take years before he could "make use" of her. Also, it is Natali's personality and the idea of stealing her from Pavlo that attracts him so much. I'll make this more clear in a future update.

ZZchromosome, I didn't know I could resubmit. I will look into this. Thank you!

The full Loyalty Gene story is pretty big. This part, the prequel, is a chapter from part three. I may have to create a special Literotica version as part one breaks one of the rules. This shouldn't be a problem as I have to edit a special version for my mother to read. Mom actually called me at work to accuse me of writing porn. I wish I had recorded the call.