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All Comments on 'The Machine Ch. 01'

by Daflinger

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

It was really going somewhere and then it just stopped abruptly. Very dissatisfied with the way it quit.

DaflingerDaflinger24 days agoAuthor

Sorry to hear that anon... plan on more if it is liked.

LongTimer2LongTimer219 days ago

Loved the premise. Looking forward to more.

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