All Comments on 'The Mage and the Rogue'

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Admiralbird348Admiralbird348over 5 years ago
Good start

Good story so far. I’m a little confused with our main character. At first she was mean to the strangers, then she’s nice in camp but she won’t speak up to the chief. I’d like to see a stronger person to root for. Thanks for writing:))

Ed

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