All Comments on 'The Magic Remote'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good start. Pacing and flow were pretty good. I want to see how he uses this on classmates and teachers, but I hope you’re not done with Mom.

Maybe she’ll find it and use it on him? I can’t decide how his friend fits in, yet.

5*

Tc

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Thanks again for the chapter

Can't wait for Magic remote part 2, with more magic remote shenigans with Henry & Mom, including more new college girls also bff Aaron in on the sexy fun next time. impossible to resist for long also new magic remote responsibilities

Catch Ya later

Cheers!

davevsr1davevsr1over 1 year ago

GRRReat !!!! for your 2nd story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please keep relationship with mom going

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I was hoping it was a setup from Aaron and his mom. Mom wanted sex with son and came up with a plan to trick him. That would have been a good plot twist. Could have had mom tell him when he tried to use it at breakfast. Last part could have had mom drop the robe and look at son and say "Someone is a little over dressed young man".

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aover 1 year ago

I sort of liked the story. I question the depth of the son's love and respect for his mother. With the remote. he could learn of his mother's true thoughts, desires, wants and needs and then try to fulfill them. At 20 years of age, I would think he would be more mature, self-confident and self-assured. Would like to see the story continue and the son develop into a mature man.

muskyboymuskyboyover 1 year ago

Aaron added nothing to this story. The lack of any emotions takes a lot away from a potentially great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I hope part 2 is in the works.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 1 year ago

Very hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

Snipe85Snipe85over 1 year ago

Love the story. Please Continue.

Five Stars

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