All Comments on 'The Magic Words Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

An extremely erotica tale of unbridled love physically shared.

More poignant than any I have read on this site previously.

The pluralization missing on oneach line could not reduce the five - 5 - I have rated this contribution. I see this is one story submitted; please continue with your offerings,

TheKrrakTheKrrakalmost 3 years ago

Colour me confused, but it seems that this missive would be better served by being in "Mind Control" rather than "Transgenders & Crossdressers". I honestly don't know what your score will be here as there doesn't seem to be anything to do with the category.

It is a well written piece, but seems out of place.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Awesome! Top drawer!!

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Greetings. Veronika Swallow My name is Veronika Swallow and you are in trouble now. Just by visiting this page, you’ve revealed your deep desire to experience something titillating and taboo. I write about dominance, control, and obedience. I know that deep inside every pers...