All Comments on 'The Magnificent Girl'

One of the most romantic erotic stories I have ever read!

I must be a different generation my girls are on top and my kittys on bottom lol. Thanks for the read

outside the box and wonderful -tu!

Yes, my kinky, perverted mind thought that B would perhaps give birth to a black baby, or something like that. He was watching so closely as the head appeared etc and whammo what a shock that would have been. With the progression from shaving to bleaching to a tattoo, there was always the chance she allowed some other person to "appreciate" her girl. Ha.

This was really good fun!

Great romance with a nice touch of erotica.

Just a small item. Girl names Marla and Maria were to similar, I confused them once or twice.

Wonderful story though.

Marla and Maria are the same person. Sweet story, glad no psychiatrists have commented to date about her upbringing or stability. Hubby does well to delete ‘pussy’ from his vocabulary and treat a quirk as delightful!

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I enjoy a good story with a Loving wife and husband, and this was that story.

I did not like the story. This kind of shyness is probably a thing left back in the last century, were children did not get any reasonable or valuable information about their 'private parts' and naive teenagers ended up with unplanned pregnancies and or STD's. I just can not even fathom anyone being that shy in this day of internet knowledge - unless they were from a muslim country.

The way they referred to her pussy as "girl" was just hugely off-putting. Like in a there's-some-serious-trauma-there kind of way.

The “girl” thing was bizarre. I thought the story might take a weird twist that she had a Siamese twin down there.

In reality, if a woman kept talking like that I’d be concerned she was non compos mentis and a statutory rape charge waiting to happen.

It was a little confusing at the beginning, with Ross's girlfriend Maria and Jake's sister Marla. The "i" and the "l" look almost identical.

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"I guess I am ready for you to see my tattoo?" - Didn't he see it when she got it?

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@Lickideesplit, no they are NOT the same person! "I was facing the door and saw Jake's sister, Marla walking in. She had been a year behind me in school and had moved to the area shortly after Jake." That doesn't sound like a guy seeing the woman he just broke up with walking in!

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I was wondering if there'd be any comments in the delivery room about the tattoo and such, but then figured that with all the copycats that they wouldn't think twice.

Very nice to read a happy, pleasant story! Thanks for writing.

Cute!

When she called it her 'girl' that was hot. The only thing I didnt like was sharing pictures of your wifes pussy, that is cuck like behaviour. I dont understand why its in the loving wives section either.

Cute story. Bit peculiar with the photos and the book ans Oprah. But was nice to see a loving couple.

Even though we never found out why Belinda had that somewhat strange view or fixation about her vagina, this story was well done, and a bit different.

Very sexy in parts, and an enjoyable read.

Very enjoyable story!

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Bee was delightfully quirky. I wonder why she treated her pussy as her girl. Anyway, loved it. A nice change from all the cheating and near-miss stories. :)