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Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowover 1 year ago

Missing some tags - at the very least Non-con - borderline rape.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

terrible writing. so many mistakes. get an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wearing "heals"?! Confusing genders?! I couldn't count nor recall all of the mistakes.

ShortieJenShortieJenover 1 year agoAuthor

Help me out with the mistakes, don't just complain. I have tried to get editors, they never respond. Thanks.

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Hey, I am back. I am submitting slower, having a friend help me with edits. thanks.

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