by Sedonia Guillone
The only criticism I have of your story is that it should have been in the romance category. It is a lovely one.
Besides the really hot scenes, kickass characters (I loved the captain!) and sweet plot, this is simply some of the best writing on Literotica. You have a real gift for a weaving compelling and vivid narration and erotic imagery you can almost taste. Please, keep these stories coming...
Wonderfully written and so romantic. It stirred me as I read and saw the pictures in my minds's eye.