by ms_599
START, SURE HOPE THAT THERE IS A LOT MORE TO COME OF THIS STORY...! BETTY jo xoxo
This story so far is amazing. I absolutely love the build up of what’s to come. What do you think about the idea of Dave eventually forcing/getting his new girl to marry him? Maybe Rebecca was actually a dude forced to be a girl and the main character is Dave’s next target of transformation. That could be another reason Rebecca’s clothes fit the main character. Being they both were lean men. Or a twist could be rebecca is in on the whole transformation of the main character and helps Dave.
Ah, so many possibilities, I love it. Keep up the awesome work and hope this story gets continued very soon. A+
luv to have that happen to me, butt I want it to include servicing his cock with my mouth and ass
Hope next part is longer. Ended right when it was getting good. Keep it up and give us more. Love dominate submissive stories like this. He really isn't that much against what he's doing and will end up loving it.
Great job! Longer parts would help, how he gets the rest of him glamorous would be a great thing to cover in the next chapter because everyone KNOWS he's going ot submit.
This was a very well written story of this genre! Very impressive story and writing. Truly one of the best written and exciting stories on Literotica and deserves attention. Will be one of my most favorite stories that I happened to find. I hope to see more or an additional continuation. Congratulations!