by DG Hear
What a place to stop. Have to know what happens. Great story DG, but I always get that from you
An avid fan
Another avid fan here. I have to admit that I kind of wish that it was novel instead of a short story!
I was afraid Mary would be Amy's mother. I should have had more faith in you. I still expect Mary to show up again, but you didn't take the "easy" way out.
Could I have one of your foot massages Jeff, er.. DG? I'll give you a passionate kiss as payment. LOL I'm in Amy's age range, not that of her mother. Is that enticing enough? ;) Loved the part about diaper duty too. - another loyal fan, but I'm in Europe, so you have to cross the pond to claim the kiss! LOL
I love this plot. Keep up the fine work. Can't wait for each installment.
Your story is a really good read, I'm looking forward to the next installment.
This chapter contains a lot of excellent situations and is fast paced. I can understand Jeff's nervousness, fears and uncertainties. He does not want to lose Amy. Will the truth about his past be too much for Amy or is she going to be grateful for the open communications with Jeff?
Let's see where this goes.
5*
BJ