All Comments on 'The Man Of The House'

One of the best I've read in some time, don't let this storyline die.

I concur. This story begs for a sequel.

HAD A PROBLEM WITH THE RAMON STUFF.....sounds racist, you know?

GOOD STORY THOUGH......but a little obvious, stereotypical not to mention fucking predictable.

it's Dire Straits, not Dire Straights. The group's name is not a comment on their exuality.

This story does beg for a continuation or sequel because it's great, just like your other story. It's a shame that you don't publish more ofter because both of your stories are exceptional.

Excellent story and very well written . One of the best stories i have read in along time

Great story. Please tell me there's a sequel.

First time in a while that a story has managed to keep my interest all the way through! As a female who enjoys 'naughty' stories I found it very believable in the sense that the narrative sounded quite accurate from an 18 yr old hormone filled youth! PLEASE continue it - cant wait for more! Btw I am not a youngster but am older than Danielle is and if I were her I would want you to continue ad infinitum!! x

This story demands a Follow-Up. Maybe Son & Step-Mom can Punk out Dad.

and make him the "Cleaner" after son is Done Dad gets his licks in.

and Mom could be Brought Home so he Does'nt miss her so much

and given her "own" place. paid for by Dad.

just to Keep Dad in-line for Promotion.

just to be sure Dad follows Orders they could get him on Film doing his Step-Daughter and Other Too Young Women.

VERY hot story! Sure wish I had a stepson!

Keep up the good work!

Sandy

There's nothing better than a hot story like this with a dash of humor thrown in for good measure. Kudos!!!!

This was a crack-up of a story. Not only was it sexy, it had the right kind of humor thrown in, too! Just keep going with this one, I'd love to know where you'll go, mate!

Thank you

I'd love to be him! Lucky bastard!!

Story was hot, fun, entertaining, and I have to admit humorous.

You don't read "em" this entertaining very often!

Thanks for the thrill!

And thanks for writing!

I enjoyed the substance, but I would recommend you find a good editor. I don't mean that in any derogatory sense— just that there were some errors that pulled me out of the action as I was reading it. Sometimes self-editing is just not a good idea as the author is likely to auto-correct in their mind.

Excellent work. Reminds me a lot of the classic Jeff’s Harem. I’d love to see where you take this story. With that much wild pussy in house he’s going to have to start taping it, post videos online at xtube, and have his mom flash his friends for fun. Get his name tattooed over his sister’s pussy. Own both of those girls and film them fingering each other in-between fuck fests. “Whatever you say Daddy”

wrong categorie

very good story , hope there will be more soon

This guy is so fucking lucky it's not true! He's got a very horny step-sister and a real slutty milf-bitch for a step mother, and she's got big tits. Jesus, it's enough to make him go blind. I sure wish it was me there fucking those two sluts.

you need to write a second part

I would love to see a second part to this, or better yet, a whole series, if you're up to it

there has to be another chapter. you can't just leave this with a huge cliffhanger with more possible outcomes

cant leave the story hanging like that it drives me crazy this is one of the better stories well wrote and entertaining

but, you said he loves his mom. it sounded like he hasnt spoken to or seen his mom in three months. that doesnt sound like he loves her as much as he claimed in the first part of the story.

what about his real mom and the rest of the story it needs to be finished dont leave us hanging

Another very hot story. I simply loved it, hehe. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work!

that was a great story please continue with the series I'm sure there's more. Ur a great writer. Keep up the great work. :-)

This was one dad that deserved it! Great story. Thanks and keep writing!

Hey - really enjoyed this. Great characters - Robbie is the man we all want to be! Whatta stud. Perfect couplings and his new mommy is bad. It was a little too long for me though - maybe could have made Robbie's other conquests as additional stories but that aside I read it from start to finish as it deserved it.

A bit long, but still good. How does his step-sister feel about getting pregnant by him? And what about his real mom? Robbie could pay her way for a visit, then share her also. Maybe dad could want Stacey? Then they could havesome real family fun!

Great work. Can't wait for part two. Hope It's soon. Keep up the great work.

i loved this i really do hope there is a follow up chapter were the dad catches them and the son gets even for his mom.

I really enjoyed this story. I hope it keeps going. The guys personality was top notch and I hope he ruined any other man for his two new whores. I laughed a good chunk of the way though this read. I can help but think of dad getting back mom is stuck in bed with him while getting frustrated and jealous of her daughter who is getting pounded in her brothers room.

Boring story with boring writing about boring people, looks like you hit a trifecta to bad it was a loser.

Dont know why boring guy there was so disappointed... Now mind you, it certainly wasnt the best story Ive ever read, wouldnt even make my top ten...but it had a few elements that just turned me on for some reason. The wife calling him 'daddy' and 'the man of the house' as well as his step sister calling her mother 'mommy' in front of him just seemed to turn me on! The bitch sister saying mommy seemed kind of trippy ;). ...or maybe it was her saying mommy with his dick buried deep that did it, heh. Anyway wish there was another chapter with sister entertainment!

Thanks for the fun read!

Hot story though it was kind of cliche that the son was a football star with a big cock fucking the cheerleader slut stepsister as well as the big titted stepmom.

I liked the kinky sex he had with his step-mom and step-sister.

A damn good read, thanks

"IT'S LONGED WINDED AND COMPLETELY A LAME PIECE OF SHIT.

TOTALLY FUCKING UNBELIEVABLE. YOU MUST HAVE A BUNCH OF INBREDS READING YOU CRAP TO THINK IT'S ANYTHING BUT A PILE OF STINKING HOSESHIT. TOO MANY HALFASSED HACKS LIKE YOU WRITING ON HERE."

Grandma, what the hell are you doing on this website?

That splat you just heard was the story falling off a 100 foot cliff. Way too abrupt of an ending. Keep writing, you'll get better.

Good story add another chapter

this is good keep going to where the son takes total control of the house and the father can't do anything about it

After a while I get the best stuff........

Great

This story end far too abruptly for my liking plus you can easily write a further chapter or two to actually finish this story. Still, I given you ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ for this effort .

I enjoyed the whole story, momma and daughter . Wow hope you have more ...

So super stud gets two worthless whores? Wow what a deal. Please stop making whores sexy and worth anything. The sis fucked every male in her school and old guys. That is not something any man would value Argall at all. One star because they don't give negative score

Dude, you really have to continue this. This is a 5 fucking stars!!

Next chapter ! Good story, I like it a lot.

AAAAA+++++

Dude, c'mon, we need another chapter of this!