All Comments on 'The Man That Converted Me'

Yummy!

Any notes on this story are deeply appreciated, thanks x

Loved this story

This is hottest story I've read in a long tine.

Why do I have a feeling Brandon was set up?

Great story, loved it - can't wait for the next chapter....

Such a HOT story! An alpha that always wanted to try anal, and a submissive guy alone in a cabin for a few days! I'd be nervous too, if a guy had me wear his girlfriend's clothes and made sexual advances towards me, knowing he wanted to fuck me! I too would give in and find myself going along with it.

The pink chastity, the spreader bar and things like that might be too much for me though! Nothing was forced upon him. He submissively succumbed to it all!

The "no turning back" thought is SO TRUE! To give your body to another man is such a personal, intimate and perminant decision.

This is a great story and I hope you continue writing. So many of us desire a relationship like this totally surrendering to the alpha male.

for a !st time writing you did great

Luv where this is going. Keep up the writing.

Very sexy. I'd love to see part two soon. Maybe the sissy's GF knew what he needed all along and this was a set up hmmm

Great story! Can't wait to read about the next couple of days :)

It was hot. It was well written. It also felt a bit too long for it's part of the story. You are off to a great start, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. <3

Please continue this story. I could picture myself as the slut right to the end. I could visualize the taste of every thing that you described.

Loved it! Especially the part where the sissy dressed in my favorite color…PINK!

And to be dressed like that and have a dominant black cock control me!

Loved it, you did a great job in detail. I met with a black guy on one of my business travels to St. Louis and it was just about like this. I am wondering if the girl friends had something to do with him not having his clothes bag with him. I wish it were me over and over again but i need something more often now. Thanks again for the wonderful story that brought back memories from years gone by

I so hope that this story continues! It's the perfect ammount of affirmation and humiliation. I've grown soo tired of stories where the protagonist activaley hates his fate and this story is the perfect cure for that! I hope that their GFs are either in on it or are willing to make this into a poly thing

Great story. Can't wait for part 2. Love how Brandon is enjoying submitting to daddy. If possible please add more feminization n even hotter sex

I have parts 2 & 3 mapped out and some of part 4. I think it’s going to be a 5-6 part series with potential for more. I still need time though to finish part 2 before it’s ready to publish

Love this story so much! More feminization please :) well done

Love this story. I can't wait to see how the girlfriends fit in to the sissy's new life. It seems obvious they were in on the plan.

This was absolutely amazing, Lamar Is the perfect Daddy any sissy could ask for: nurturing his sissy’s awakening and only being firm when he has to, he shows his superiority in mounting, I can’t wait for more.

I love stories about straight men who get bent over and turned out by a gay dom. And this was an ambitious first story, well done.

Everyone is different, and speaking for myself I found this a little too over the top for me to keep connected. I loved it at first, but then loved it less when we got to spreader bars, ball gags, and other nonsense.

I also was lukewarm about the ending. I wanted the women back in the story, gloating about how they set the little beta man up for his conversion.

I look forward to your next story.

Wow, don't stop writing, I loved your story, please continue!

Don't like the abuse!

Couldn't stop reading. Hopefully you finish the story. Need to see how you want it to end.

Just submitted part 2!! Just waiting for it to be published.

I couldn’t stop reading. Submitting to a Alpha black man and becoming a feminine sissy for him is such a turn on. Can’t wait to read more. Ty

He wasn’t BBC but this is almost how my own Dad and I started except I ate dads sss a lot but great stories as I have had huge bbc before one took 30 minutes to bottom out

Enjoying it so far. Love the cock cage and his little clitty coming in it from being fucked. Hope he gets fucked with others watching.

I loved this story, I wish I had this experience, I feel like a depraved slut

I couldn't stop reading, it made me feel like I'm a slut, thank you so much

This story revealed my most intimate desires, I feel like a slut who desperately needs a big black dick, thank you for sharing this beautiful story

The plot is identical, the characters have the same names, and a good chunk of the dialogue is word-for-word identical to the adult illustrated story "The Shifting Self" by Kizaru3d.

In regards to the previous comment, if you look at the date this story was published and the date the first pages of “The shifting self” were published, you’ll see my story was published much earlier. I wrote this story and sent it to Kizaru3D to see if they wanted to use it, as they are my favourite artist, and they did. If you look at the first pages Kizaru posted of “The Shifting Self”, she mentions it was a story written by a patron, that patron was me. You can message them and ask if this is all true as I’m sure they wouldn’t mind confirming this. So if you want to see this story brought to life, with just some minor artistic differences, then visit Kizaru3D’s patreon as part 1 is now complete!

I need to thank you, your story definitely changed my life, I've been thinking about becoming a black cock slave for a long time, your story came at the right time in my life

I decided that my purpose in this life is to serve every black dick, the next step is to get fucked in my asspussy

Thank you from the bottom of my heart

Thiis iis how to write erotiica!!! Amazing front to ending, can't wait to read what comes next!

What a beautifully erotic story! I’m going to start reading chapter two once I recover ;) I’m sure it’ll be just as enjoyable to me as the first chapter.