All Comments on 'The Manor Cove Widows Ch. 01'

Great start, loved the bed bath, so erotic.

Looking forward to Chapter 2

Nice erotic start

Interesting start

Is nice to find Jack in new job of nursing. Don’t remember him being a nurse before , doctor yes, please use several of the residents of Manor Cove for various sexual fetishes. I know you will come back to Lucy and Jill in the end. How was Lucy able to deep throat Jack when her only experience was with small dick husband? Keep the stories coming

Can’t wait to read about what happens at manor cove

Very Interesting start. I look forward to the next chapters, including his involvement with Jill.

Please continue this story, I enjoyed it tremendously.

Awesome story, new job and new character names. I hope the next chapter at the Manor happens soon

This typist must have written the book on run-on sentences. I just skimmed, hoping to find a paragraph that wasn't filled with broken, run-on sentences. I didn't. There's a reason for punctuation rules. Learn them. Use them. If that's just too hard, then stop making us do the work you should be doing, and just quit puking out garbage you try to pass off as writing. It's not.

It started out really good. I hope it continues with another chapter or more..

This is a great new story line.

I love the way you write in the England English. So much different that our USA English with all the “slang” that is added.

I hope this is a lovely long story like some of your previous stories.

Did I miss the incest part all I read was a gigolo and a 70yr patient

You have an excellent premise, medium to mean lead ups that kept the readers informed and the method allows former. I grant you Jack

4* on nothing but no illed up