All Comments on 'The Marine & The Beauty Queen Ch. 02'

Semper Fi

Short but sweet.

Like your style. FYI m1a1 is approximately 63 tons.

Susan seems like she is in love. Why did she cheat? On to ch.3.

Thanks for all the comments. Yes, I wish I had made this chapter longer, but it just seemed like a good place to break. This is the first story I have ever submitted to Literoricia, and I wasn't exactly sure how pages in Word would translate to pages on Literoticia. Now I know. The entire six chapter story has already been submitted, but for my next story (already written as well), I will definitely change the chapter breaks to make each chapter longer. Again, thanks.

The father is retired Marine, not former Marine. Once a Marine, always a Marine!

Next time, maybe a couple pages?????? Thanks

Agreed! Cliff hanger, we want more! Why 1 page?!!

Whydoncha wait until you have at least three pages before you publish??