All Comments on 'The Marine Bk. 02 Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Another great chapter. Well rounded, we enjoy the story line and how you have managed to keep Jennifer included. Can’t wait for more

DevilbobyDevilbobyalmost 2 years ago

Be very careful Mr U. Your inventive mind is showing. Looking forward to more. 5 star story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Thank you for including where the next installment will be posted

Sune2022Sune2022almost 2 years ago

First great Story as always. Have loved this from chp 1. I usually never ask a writer this but is there any chance we get a CHP to say goodbye to the family he left behind? I know it is challenging to writhe but I fell in love with his sisters, cousins, parents, and grand Father. A telling of their stories of hearing of his death and how they handled it.

As I said I read sense chp 1 and your writing is so good you can not help but fall for all your characters, and I feel for them.

ker63469ker63469almost 2 years ago

5 Stars all the way. Am loving this series and the previous one. I did notice one minor mistake, on page 2 Angie called him Nate and then she called him Nick. Which was confusing for a moment. Bit hey, it happens. Still an excellent tead

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcalmost 2 years ago

Good continuation but I’m still struggling with understanding Jennifer’s strong attraction to our hero. Doesn’t mesh with who a person with her training would react. 5*

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