by UltimateSin
Another great chapter. Well rounded, we enjoy the story line and how you have managed to keep Jennifer included. Can’t wait for more
Be very careful Mr U. Your inventive mind is showing. Looking forward to more. 5 star story.
First great Story as always. Have loved this from chp 1. I usually never ask a writer this but is there any chance we get a CHP to say goodbye to the family he left behind? I know it is challenging to writhe but I fell in love with his sisters, cousins, parents, and grand Father. A telling of their stories of hearing of his death and how they handled it.
As I said I read sense chp 1 and your writing is so good you can not help but fall for all your characters, and I feel for them.
5 Stars all the way. Am loving this series and the previous one. I did notice one minor mistake, on page 2 Angie called him Nate and then she called him Nick. Which was confusing for a moment. Bit hey, it happens. Still an excellent tead
Good continuation but I’m still struggling with understanding Jennifer’s strong attraction to our hero. Doesn’t mesh with who a person with her training would react. 5*