All Comments on 'The Marine Ch. 09'

Favorite chapter so far! Was hot and emotional

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so when does the little sister join them?

love your writing you are one of my favorites.

Thanks for another amazing story. I'm not usually into tales of incest but this one is beautifully realized and a lot of fun

Really well done, pulling everything together for a finale. Hope Amy, Emma, and Hannah all move in to an apartment or house, perhaps moving to Australia. Whatever happens I don't want them to end up apart. 5* for the emotions of this chapter.

I love your stories overall and absolutely your writing style. This subject with the 3 girls on 1 guy thing isn't really my cup of tea. I have a hard time believing all 3 women would be ok with sharing Nate. Hannah professing her love after 3 failed relationships and coming back to see Nate a wreck.... now she has to share? I also keep thinking of Nate as a bit shallow and sort of a man-whore now. I know this is taboo/kink etc. however you are posting more and more chapters of this (which I love) turning it into a little novella. So that's why my opinions are changing. I could handle this subject material if it were 1 or 2 pages (don't get as invested) just not from a bigger more fleshed out story as you write. Keep on writing because I really like your style a lot!!!!!!! thanks!

Well done!

Nate still should've fucked with Katie as well in this final chapter.

Awesome story! The type you can't stop reading.