All Comments on 'The Marshal Pt. 02'

Hope they survive!

5

Excitement mounts. Looking forward to next part.

Holy Cow...... what a good thriller this is playing out to be.... well played so far...... the emotions are filtering through loud and clear every step of the way in every way both nerves and hot sexual tension and thrills.... oh my......... :-)

Like many good writers of action who write at Romance, either the writer has a sex fetish or is trying to please readers. This readers prefers more action and few pages of graphic sex. It slows down the story too much for my taste. For those who like a lot of such descriptions this is a 7/5. Good writing, real characters, I have to stick with 5/5

Maybe over the weekend we can get the next chapter.

Awesome - 5*

Wow!!!!!!

What a roller coaster ride, fantastic!!!!!

Best ever.

Scores another 5/5

Exceptional.

I need to know what happens!!