All Comments on 'The Marshal Pt. 03'

Superb! It would make a great movie. In fact, I saw the whole thing as a movie as I was reading it.

I would love to see one more story to see how everything turns out with her testimony the missing SDM and if they might find a way to spend more time together after everything concludes. Just

Great story and I hope there is at least one more chapter to see the bad guy taken down. Thanks

I'm only giving you 5 stars, even though I enjoyed your story. The reason I am, is because you left certain ends dangling. 1: who was the mole, and 2: what happened to his DSM?

Excellent so far, but it can't stop there, too many loose ends, too many unanswered questions.

Really enjoyed the character development and the story line. The ending begs for more in several directions.

A few loose ends that left me with "and, but...." Worth every one of five stars.

I am loving this story so far. I am looking forward to the remaining chapters as per the authors comment on Pt 1.

Excellent part. Wonder war dangers are ahead for Rob and Han.

Please give us more, tie up the loose ends and give us the future for the mains we all hope for

This 5 star tale is screaming for continuance.

Most of you who wrote there is open ended stuff and talking about the story ending too soon apparently don't read the material the author offered in preview that explains how many chapters and give a heads up regarding the upcoming heading offering information about what is forthcoming in his comments responding to an inquiry at the conclusion of ch 1. Just a little effort and you wouldn't be embarrased with your remarks. Good "Griefous" folks pay attention.

Here is his comments below listed in the response to questions after part #1:

The Marshal

Eight Parts

Forty-Five Chapters

~172,500 words

The Marshal Pt. 01

Chapters 01 - 06

US Marshal arrives in LA to transport a federal witness

The Marshal Pt. 02

Chapters 07 - 10

Passions explode; A surprise attack; A narrow escape

The Marshal Pt. 03

Chapters 11 - 15

Plans go awry; On the run; Safe at last; Sad goodbyes

The Marshal Pt. 04

Chapters 16 - 20

A daring escape; Rob is tasked with keeping Bo-bae safe

The Marshal Pt. 05

Chapters 21 - 27

Bae fights for her life; Rob and Bae become close; The trial

The Marshal Pt. 06

Chapters 28 - 34

Bae gets a new life; Rob is reassigned; Joy and sorrow

The Marshal Pt. 07

Chapters 35 - 40

Britney's identity is discovered; Death throes; Escape

The Marshal Pt. 08

Chapters 41 - 45

The queen speaks; An offer made; Safe & happy at last

Note this is from the author not me. Take care........ :-)

I think it's unanimous that we are looking forward to part 4.

The first comment was telling - 'I saw it like a movie!'

Plot, characters, etc. all worthy of highest praise, but when the author makes one live the story, feel the struggle, and pulls out all the reader's emotions, he as ascended the heights of top action fiction. This series is worthy of some of the best writers of the genre. My only plea: Sanity, please don't write too many of these, I will never be able to keep up with my work! :)

THC

Sorry for my premature comment, I was enjoying the story so much i assumed I was at the end. Thankfully I was wrong.

It's a little drawn out for a pure romance story, but who's to complain? Surely not I! 5*

A superlative story.

5/5

Great story so far. Not really seeing the romance though...

Good story and real was the taming of the shrew with lots of action.

Fucking stellar. Not talking about the star rating which is again 5, file under “duh.”