All Comments on 'The Marshal'

I'm a little surprised Alice didn't want to mourn her husband for a little while. Did she also find murdering the two outlaws to be sexy? I mean it's always nice to be rescued from two men planning to rape you and possibly to kill you, too, but once rescued you're not required to blink and then fuck the Marshal. Or are you? It reminds me of that song: "I fucked the marshal, but I didn't fuck the deputy." I may have the words slightly wrong. Despite my quibbles, I enjoyed the story. Nobody can accuse these two women of being reluctant, that's for sure! 5* ~~JB

May it be so for each of us

Fun little western story. Another chapter or two would be nice. Five stars!

This is the first western written by Ashson that I've read, although far from the first one ive ever read by the author. If there are others, I haven't seen one yet. That being said, this short story was fun and could easily set up a series or additional chapters.

By itself I think 5 stars make sense... if there are more to come, it could be even MORE fun !