All Comments on 'The Mask Ch. 03'

I'll be dead by the time these writers finish these stories...ugh

You have the basis for a good story here...you should finish it.

And a good one too

It has been AGES but I am holding out hope that you will finish this. You have a lot of talent thank you for sharing it here.

But as for tantalizing us......I can't thank you for that. I must just beg you for more.

Warm Regards,

R

Truly an amazing story, you must please finish this! I'm captivated from beginning to end and am yearning for the rest!!! :D 2 thumbs up, and keep on writing!

Well I must say I have been hooked from the beginning and you certainly know how to keep the intrigue! I look forward to seeing more of this story. It just keeps getting better and better!!!

Don't stop writing for your first story this is really good I am hooked,

haters will hate let them be but continue to write as someone onces told me I person can say what they want but only you can change your will

P.s. more please I want to know what she isn't telling him about his scars

Even though u hav mispelled some words im totally willing 2 overlook them do to the awesomeness of this story. Please don't stop

Good story love the the characters!

Do yourself a favour and get an editor, and its SHUDDERED not shuttered, look up what a shutter is. This whole story has no redeeming qualities.