by Angellica1612
taking something so disgusting & all around f*cked up & turning it into this beautiful, sensual masterpiece...now THAT'S talent!! 5 stars & thanx 4 sharing! now i need a glass of water ;o)
isn't erotic in real life it is despicable, however; this story is a well constructed erotic fantasy and as a fantasy it is very good and enjoyable.
Thank you!
An unconvincing run of the mill rape fantasy. Thumbs down.
. . . . that I have read latley. Great and skilful writeing and I look foward to another piece from you. Sit back and sip a little bit of bubbly, you desetve it.
Thank you Angellica that was very erotic. I will be reading more.
I'm not really turned on by reluctance or non consented sex, and since nothing on this story feels like it is done against the her will, I think I can say I'm still not turned on by it, but by a very romantic story written in such a talented way at one point I could smell the ocean breeze.
Thanks for the story and congratulations on your wonderful writing!
Angellica,
I'm just read all 4 posted stories. I love your writing and wish you'd post a new story here, perhaps a BBW story. Or perhaps you could share where and how else you publish.
I am one of those hairy legged good old boys from Texas, and I have almost never read anything from this category (rape). Gotta tell ya, I could not have been more surprised at how poetically this work flowed; you managed to take a weed from the human garden and, as best as possible, create a beautiful flower (no, it's not perfect, but it's damn good). Congrats, what a pleasant read on what is typically an ugly subject. 2-14-02