by live4thebj
Get an actual editor. When you read your own work, your brain fills in what you meant, making it extremely easy to miss errors (like you did) no matter how many times you give it an editing pass.
I being an anal man, enjoyed your story immensely! Fortunately for me, it was my mother not a sister. I had only brothers 6 of us total.
It was mom's ass to keep from getting pregnant. Along with me fingering her clit at the same time.
Then it was me that wanted my ass satisfied. Mom would use veggies in me while sucking me off.
You almost got a 5....
Dave.