by Thruxomatic
Very interesting-good character development-and a nice twist at the end.
Good writing (but could you learn the difference between 'taut' and 'taught'?). Good plot, everything paced, characters emerging gradually, as in life encounters. Fine twist at the end. Credible and, well, hot. Well done. Love to see more.
Loved the development of the massage echoing the development of the relationship between the characters. A few slight editorial flaws here and there were a tad distracting, but on the whole it was a really fine story, well told. Her insight into him contrasted significantly with his lack of knowledge about her. There is so much depth in the story, like the layers she reaches through and releases in him. I liked it very much!