All Comments on 'The Masseuse'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Wow

Very interesting-good character development-and a nice twist at the end.

AbbeyLaneAbbeyLaneover 15 years ago
Gripping story

Very well written and had me on the table.

rsqman69rsqman69over 15 years ago
Wow!!!

Holy hot fucking story. Where can I sign up for a massage like that?

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 15 years ago
very fine writing

Good writing (but could you learn the difference between 'taut' and 'taught'?). Good plot, everything paced, characters emerging gradually, as in life encounters. Fine twist at the end. Credible and, well, hot. Well done. Love to see more.

GlasgowgirlGlasgowgirlover 15 years ago
Excellent in every detail

Loved the development of the massage echoing the development of the relationship between the characters. A few slight editorial flaws here and there were a tad distracting, but on the whole it was a really fine story, well told. Her insight into him contrasted significantly with his lack of knowledge about her. There is so much depth in the story, like the layers she reaches through and releases in him. I liked it very much!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Ismaili

I gotta say, I never expected an Ismaili erotica lol

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