All Comments on 'The Maturation of Vinnie Pt. 02'

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sbrooks103sbrooks103almost 9 years ago
Thoughts

Nit pick – the food dish is “mussels” NOT “muscles”.

Although I think she realizes it now, he should tell her explicitly that even if things don’t work out with the two of them she has a family in the Blantons.

As far as her “activities” go, he was at least as bad, without her excuse.

gatorhermitgatorhermitabout 16 years ago
Well Written Romance

This story is a very logical extension of characters already developed. Very well paced and erotic. Looking forward to Pt. 03.

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