All Comments on 'The Mature Lady'

very good story, hopefully there will be a part 2

... I think you should continue with this one. It has a lot going for it and I'd like to read more.

Well done -- five stars and a favourite.

While the concept is good, the story is stiff.

"The driver exiting the limo asking, 'Is your name Mrs. Greene?'"

No, the driver would simply inquire, "Mrs. Greene?"

He's an Alfa? Seriously?

"'I knew you were wonderful women, thank you for giving me the pleasure of making love to you.' Said Thomas as he stroked the nude mature woman at his side." One becomes two? when did that happen? Will two become three??

This needs work, serious work.

I enjoyed the evolution of the story. Distinct and deliberate yet delicate!

I can see the blushing and other feelings described.

Things like this although fiction may and do really happen, both in the speed and depth of emotion and commitment

Keep it up and give us more!

This was with taste and exciting!!!!!!!!!! Please most definitely continue I would love to read more!!!!!!!!!!!