All Comments on 'The Maze'

Love Game show type stories. Please decide to continue 4 stars for this one.

Possible 5 on the next one Thanks

First of your pieces read, but will explore further. Not because this piece is particularly erotic, rather because the premise is intriguing and has erotic potential as April’s dilemma suggests. Even in its brevity the piece shows potential for character engagement/development, humor and sexual fun (as promised). Surprised you lost interest not to mention hard to believe you could not contrive other traps not to mention explore more graphically — after all, April’s experience hinted at that. Hope you come back to this theme/premise.

2 max could be only 2 people can go in the room, or 2 of the people will get a max jolt of stimulation?

good start. more please.

Great start. I hope you'll keep this going. Thanks!

I love it... I hope you continue!!!

I think the story is amazing maybe one of the traps could be a large ball of sentient latex in the middle of a chalk maze on the floor of a room if they stray from the chalk maze the latex ball gets them just a thought

Definitely liking where this is going. On to part 2!