All Comments on 'The Maze Ch. 01: Minotaur'

Well written and very different - I like it!

Amazing. Please contiinue.

Thank you for the comments! :-)

I definitely want to continue this one.

But what lies beyond? More challenges? A sexual paradise? Just an ordinary world where she is now transformed?

Exceptional creativity. It really begs for continuation.

Good story, a bit dark in places but very original nonetheless, I don’t know if it needs a sequel or not, but maybe a pt 2 with a bit of explanation would be good, especially about the people/things they met along the way, mutants or genetically created for a nefarious reason etc? Plus, is the forest where her root like feet take root like thousands of her predecessors? As I said might be a bit dark and straying into erotic horror at times or in the future.

I think I would have enjoyed Ana's POV. Why was she constantly horny?

Really liked this. Please continue!

The cum on her skin from the scarlet-flowered vine's prisoner.

Interesting. A fun read.

Would love to see this story continued. I've no doubt you could think of a novel's worth of content if this excellence is what you're capable of in just two pages trapped within a maze. Please consider continuing.

Wish granted. Chapter 2 published; Chapter 3 submitted; some ideas for Chapter 4.

Your writing is dark and dreamy like a myth or fairytale. How do you make themes of alienation, betrayal 9including self-betrayal) and despair so damn sexy? Reading your work is not only a pleasure, I think I've actually grown from it.

ImagineBlue: It's a bit like solving a puzzle. How do you walk characters through incidents that should be traumatic and psychologically scarring? I feel I'm not pushing it far enough, really. But this series, especially, builds on my love of myths and fairytales. Thank you for your comment! :-)

I would love to have had more about the dream incident