All Comments on 'The Meadowlark's Song'

This is the 1st n LAST story I will read by this moron. Rape stories should not be allowed on this site. My opinion.

this sick SOB should be castrated

Frankly, I'm feeling a bit nauseous after reading this story. Is that just a coincidence, or was your fantasy "a bit vile"?

If you've been deleting "negative" comments, and leaving the "positive" comments, and there are no comments, does that mean that there weren't ANY positive comments to leave? I kinda think it does.

I thought you developed the story very well and can't understand all the negative comments.

I thought it was very well written.

Love to hear back from you. Carygrant_69@Hotmail.com

Needs a 30-06 right up his ass. Good story.

I dislike it, but it is not badly written. Please move it to the "Non-Consent" section, where it belongs.

Several comments I see from the anti-rape people make me ask, does someone who reports a rape story in the news automatically become someone who condones rape?

The author quite clearly identifies this episode as a father raping his unwilling daughter, one of a long running series of events for the twins. I read nothing that excuses or condones the behavior of the father. In fact he is painted as a rather easily disliked individual.

Perhaps a longer build-up explaining how these girls got trapped in their situation, before or after the death of their mother, would calm down the negative critics.

I understand that a lot of readers want the safe fantasy of incest between family members to be all love and sweet music and totally consensual. They don't want to be reminded that there are real life stories which do not fit into that rosy picture.

This is a well written story, although certainly on the dark side. There was no glorification of the sex act, no prolonged description of the mechanics. In fact the description serves very well to underline the detestable nature of the father and his actions.

I would like to read more about this girl and her sister. How did she get into this situation? How might she get out of it?

Rape stories do not belong in incest.

These should be more about both parties consenting.