The Mechanic Pt. 04

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"Where are you going?"

Rowan's groggy voice gave away the fact that she'd dozed off, probably exhausted from the emotional turmoil in her head.

"To make some breakfast for my... girlfriend?"

Rowan smiled. "I like the sound of that."

"Which part; the breakfast part or the girlfriend part?"

"All of it."

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FlamethrowFlamethrow2 months ago

Amazing depth of emotions from both the MCs. Stunningly beautiful story.

justme2021justme20216 months ago

A fantastic story which I really enjoyed. Thanks for writing and sharing your work. Wonderful characters!

kbone1kbone17 months ago

Great story!

Bree_23Bree_23about 1 year ago

yeeep read it again ..never getting tired

Bree_23Bree_23over 1 year ago

I read it again this time i have Chopin , Vivaldi and Gershwin on the background haha ...well I cant get this off my mind might as well feel it all in my head ..I think I've fallen in love with Rowan ( insert dreamy emoji )

Starr79Starr79over 1 year ago

Damn, that is one of the best stories on Lit, full stop. Not to mention the sex is intensely erotic, yet meaningful. Not a lot of authors thread that needle so flawlessly. Amazing!

Bree_23Bree_23over 1 year ago

Oh my heart!!! no more??? you made me giggle like a school girl then you made me cry like my first broken heart then you made me fall in love again and again and again...thank you that was real emotion i've felt there . More of this please... a continuation perhaps ;)

CoffeeNClovesCoffeeNClovesover 1 year ago

Simply wonderful........Bravo!!!

I'm so blown away by how you are able to weave such amazing stories and have allowed us to experience these heartwarming, sometimes heart wrenching, relationships. I hope you continue to share with us your talent for creating such rich and wonderful characters, it's almost as if they could be real.

Encore!!!

ENCORE???

apollo_XIapollo_XIover 1 year ago

Loved the whole series. Your development of Rowan and Riley's character was amazing. Looking forward to more of your work.

okami1061okami1061over 1 year ago

Very impressive. So many innocuous threads, filled in later by other stories. So, in essence, these were all one grand orchestration of a network of love, extending (eventually) around the globe.

Again … impressive.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wonderful story with all of it so well written, loved every second reading it.

PurplefizzPurplefizzover 1 year ago

Just….wonderfully done, as I’ve commented earlier, it takes something to top a previously acclaimed story that was supposed to be a one off, it feels like you poured your heart and soul into this story, it flows and reads well, with no jumps or mistakes which says a lot for your beta readers and/or editor(s), well done!

Many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

From a straight guy.... thanks a lot for this beautiful & sexy story, a lot of empathy & depth & love... just great stuff , keep on the good work

BodysurferyeahBodysurferyeahover 1 year ago

Maybe Riley topping Rowan with the strapless strap on was not about the power of being on top, but about the ability to share in a new experience equally.

I was uncomfortable with Rowan being able to overcome her propensity to love em and leave em. Too many conquests over too long a period of time must create an ingrained hardness in Rowan's heart. The habit of the tiger huntress has to be hard to break. The hope for their relationship is the fact that both are able to actually listen to each other. To actually hear what the other is saying.

Perhaps Rowan's strength of character will allow her to give up the life of a player cold turkey, and the commitment that Riley showed to the relationship will be the cement that they need. Best wishes.

kathy2012kathy2012almost 2 years ago

You are an excellent writer! I have enjoyed all parts of this story! All the characters, the character development! The slow dance of romance, overcoming fear! The sex scenes were sensuous and arousing! I had to stop and take care of things every so often!

Best regards,

Kathy

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